Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).

WWW: Good knowledge of advertising conventions(Q1+2).Starting to analyse unseen media products in more detail 

EBI: Not enough media specific terminology/theory e.g. Q3 on Galaxy-revise narrative theories. Also revise tattler CSP. 

2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment. For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer.

-Anchorag

e text/slogan('The real battle')

-Costume(red shirt)

-camera shot(long shot)

3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP. 

-Excellent analysis of the product that is detailed and critically engages with the nuanced aspects of the narrative of the television advert with details reference to the CSP

-Excellent use of the theoretical framework that demonstrates a detailed and accurate understanding of how narrative are used to convey messages to the audience; consistent and accurate application of narrative theory 

-Consistent appropriate and effective use of subject terminology throughout 

4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify three points you could have made in your answer here

-Excellent knowledge and understanding of context and their influence on media products and processes, demonstrated by consistently effective explanation of how magazine covers reflect the social and cultural context in which they were created.

-Consistently appropriate and effective references to tattler magazine covers.

-Consistently appropriate and effective references to tattler magazine covers.

5) On Section B, focus on Question 7 - film industry and Black Widow. Use the mark scheme to identify three ways Black Widow was marketed to its audience.

-Excellent knowledge and understanding of context and their influence on media products and processes, demonstrated by consistently effective explanation of how magazine covers reflect the social and cultural context in which they were created.

-Consistently appropriate and effective references to CSP.

-Consistently appropriate and effective references to tattler magazine covers.

6) Finally, write down three things you are going to work on before your next mock exam in December (e.g. time management; revising CSPs etc.)

-one thing I need to work on before my first mock exam in December  is my uses of terminology and how i need to include more of them in my writing.

-another thing I need to go over  before my first media mock is the uses of narrative theory and what they are so i remember to include them into my next text.

-one last thing I need to include before my mock is to go over old CSPs in the past and there context so that when it comes up in the test I will know what there talking about.










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