Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response
1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW: Good knowledge of advertising conventions(Q1+2).Starting to analyse unseen media products in more detail EBI: Not enough media specific terminology/theory e.g. Q3 on Galaxy-revise narrative theories. Also revise tattler CSP. 2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer. -Anchorag e text/slogan('The real battle') -Costume(red shirt) -camera shot(long shot) 3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP. -Excellent analysis of the product that is detailed and critically engages with the nuanced aspects of the narrative of the television advert with details reference to the CSP -Excellent use of the theoretical f